Always Be Prepared
"Alex insisted on giving Gallien his watch, his comb, and what he said was all his money: eighty-five cents in loose change." I don't wan't your money, and I already have a watch"(Krakauers7).
Topic: Travel Advice
Here it shows that Alex wasn't really prepared as much as he should've been for his adventure into the wild. Alex seemed like he didn't really need much to survive besides the basics. He didn't bring any emergency supplies which would've been smart. When going out into the wilderness or anywhere for traveling in general you should always be prepared for the worst. You should always pack a little extra just in case you run into some problems along your trip. Pack for the worst. Pack for the what if's. An example would be when you're traveling by plane: You always wanna pack a couple of extra outfits just in case something happens while you are at your trip. This saves you money if you do need those extra outfits eventually and also saves you the hassle of trying to find extra outfits last minute if you do need them.
Overall, nice job!:)
ReplyDeleteJust be careful of your spaces.
EG:
Correct: "Alex insisted on giving Gallien his watch, his comb, and what he said was all his money: eighty-five cents in loose change." I don't want your money, and I already have a watch" (Krakauer 7).
Incorrect: "Alex insisted on giving Gallien his watch, his comb, and what he said was all his money: eighty-five cents in loose change." I don't wan't your money, and I already have a watch"(Krakauers7).
Overall, nice job!:)
ReplyDeleteJust be careful of your spaces.
EG:
Correct: "Alex insisted on giving Gallien his watch, his comb, and what he said was all his money: eighty-five cents in loose change." I don't want your money, and I already have a watch" (Krakauer 7).
Incorrect: "Alex insisted on giving Gallien his watch, his comb, and what he said was all his money: eighty-five cents in loose change." I don't wan't your money, and I already have a watch"(Krakauers7).